You know, I love you

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    I had been texting a friend, telling her about the girl I'm crazy about. She suggested I put the whole conversation into a poem. I wrote out my feelings, and confessed little things that i absolutely love about her. I always will love her, I know that. Enjoy.

    You know, I love you

    Well, I love her

    I’ve been pursuing her

    Since I laid eyes on her

    I don’t know what to do

    When she doesn’t want to talk to me

    It hurts

    And I judge a lot of how I’m doing

    Off of her

    If she’s disappointed in what I do

    Then I fall apart

    But with her

    I feel I’ve become a better person

    Over the past few months

    I’m crazy about her

    And I’m afraid

    I might go crazy

    Waiting for her

    I could, couldn’t I?

    I just say the truth

    And what’s on my mind

    I really do love her

    I can never ever deny that

    How so?

    Ah, nice

    I wonder now

    Just a bit

    You’re silly

    And you’re pretty

    It’s all good

    I only ever speak the truth

    “You’re sweet, just so you know”

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on You know, I love you

    02-16-2011

    I think it a wonderful expression of one's love flowing out. The words are gentle and in love. Good luck and my you two find love with each other for more than the here and now but for the life time.
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