Significance is noted

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Random thoughts coming together as I am sick and struggling to breathe. Can't sleep. I am happy. I put together the stringings of my mind. Little thoughts here and there that flow. I don't know that it rhymes. I don't know that its sense. I don't know if she'll ever read this, even if none of it is related to her, it would be nice to have her read it someday. Someday every soon, I pray. I really have gone round the bend.

Significance is noted

Ups and downs
Never all arounds
We take the world
For what it seems to be
The outside
The cover
The heart on the sleeve
Death is for us
All of us one day
Where will you have being?
I doubt I'll stay
Apologies
Take up space
Take up time
Jumble up my mind
I cannot control
The racings of the head
The actions I have done
The evil things I've said
Grand little nithlings
Nothing taking form
Slowly going crazy
I've fallen out of norm
Escape
Is for the destined
Ones who find it
Those who will
Those who remain
What happens to us?
We know
I know
They all continue
Knowing
Knowing the truth
Knowing the where
We're sent
Where we'll be
Where we'll learn
To see

Humble Servants
With many a fault
Though I am learning
I stumble and fall
Where can they help me
How can I save
I love
The love
That only love knoweth
Science and fantasy
Help only the other
Where the magic and magicians
Take flight
Take what they want
Crowds will all gaunt
Slowly I write
Only for my love
This is for her
None
A line of sense
Yet expressed in
Madness
My madness that grows
Someday she'll learn to read it
Someday we'll learn to show
Someday we'll learn to steal us
Hearts together high and low 

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Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

chemicalcuke’s Poems (44)

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