Anna's Song

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    Anna's Song

    Anna's song


    Anna's eyes, with arched eyebrows,

    speak of wonder, laughter, sorrow, sympathy, and surprise;

    according to her mood and guise.

     

    Her olive skin and dimpled, pointed chin

    remark beneath a gown of straight, long hair

    cascading down below her slender shoulders

    that are tanned but not as brown

    as what rests there:

    which is dark as all the mysteries of history

    and more sensual than all the romances written.

     

    Her legs and limbs are long and elegant;

    she moves like a swan in its element.

    Her breasts, chest, thighs and hips

    would cause sailor's to lose control of their ships

    and drown beneath the waves of lust;

    their last striving, the gurgled words: “I must!”-

    as they clutch for her and sink to dust.

     

    As perfect pi makes mathematicians

    laugh until they cry,

    God's calculations for her smile

    make all men pause for more than a little while

    to reflect and wish that that smile could be kept

    on a chain, or in a dish, to help them when they feel down;

    or when they seek a queen to wear their crown.

     

    But she is not a bauble, figurehead, painting, or anything

    else that could be maintained for the sake of beauty

    or desire.

    She's invested with the spirit of life

    and has a natural fire

    that burns sweetly and brightly;

    but, like a fire, can only be fed and nurtured;

    like a fire she must be respected;

    like a fire she can't be expected

    to live for another,

    without air and freedom - but just a lover

    as her fuel.

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    irreverent commented on Anna's Song

    01-12-2011

    This is a very beautiful Ode. You prose is excellent and the imagery and metaphors are exquisite.

    rsalassi commented on Anna's Song

    07-21-2010

    I rarely read, much less like, chick poems, but this one is so nicely written I just wanted to say how much I like it. It reminds me of Hepburn/Kelley's lines from The Philadelphia Story/High Society about NOT being a cold, beautiful statue, worshipped and admired from afar, but a hot-blooded beauty needing to be touched and loved up close. Great write!

    vincenzo commented on Anna's Song

    06-08-2010

    She's invested with the spirit of life and has a natural fire that burns sweetly and brightly but. a like fire, can only be fed and nutured; like a fire she must be respected; like a fire she can't be expected to live for another.... These are rich (poetic) devices from a rich (in quality ideas) poet... wish I could weave a conundrum of thoughts like these. I was enthralled all through the reading... nice one. Vin

    ginga commented on Anna's Song

    03-17-2010

    Congo, This is so full of joy, beauty and rapture. For a moment it seemed Romeo was speaking of his Juliet. A very titillating piece. ginga

    jademelissa74 commented on Anna's Song

    03-05-2010

    I have really enjoyed this line..."but just a lover as her fuel." The passionate statements about Anna are so vivid and warm. I love the descriptions of her beauty...A great piece!

    CongoNetherland

    03/05/2010

    Thanks!

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