Broken Family

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    • done with my study it was hard now my poem is published its called Prayer Study and Poem

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    You know its hard to have had about four step mothers and each left a different way. each have made my dad sad peace by peace it would hurt my dad, and me. Now i am afraid it will happen to me if i were ever too get into a relationship with someone. It had changed my image of a best friend. i don't want to end up like my dad is why. but that's besides the case. the case is my family again is broken bc of a step mother, and this family i love I hope things are worked out but u know things will not be as they were before, never as happy again I just want my dad to be happy and i don't wanting any one to hurt him again.... I want my step mother to be happy too

    Broken Family

    Open up ,

    Greave for it is not a sin.

    Tell me any thing and everything.

    Open your soul,

    And pour out your light,

    Show no mercy no hope.

    Things will never be the same.

    A family broken,

    A soul made unclean,

    A heart cry's out,

    Come on and ketch your feet.

    Nothing will ever be okay again.

    Tears fall from each childs face,

    As we sit in a hard patch of a broken home

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    Artie commented on Broken Family

    09-12-2010

    It seems like you have seen quite a bit of the dark side of relationships. I know it may not seem like it, but another side does exist. The answers, always come from within - 10 from me
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    christianprep

    09/13/2010

    thanks for commenting...

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