I am God

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    • christianprep
    • done with my study it was hard now my poem is published its called Prayer Study and Poem

    I am God

    I see all and know all
    I smell fear and death
    I hear all your prayers
    I feel betrayed
    I taste my own tears
    I think i am your savior, your God

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    wheelsal commented on I am God

    07-08-2009

    Few words and strong message. Nice write............................................................

    christianprep

    07/08/2009

    why thank you yes it is few words its a hieku i think thats what its called

    rossmangeles commented on I am God

    07-08-2009

    I love the way you portray your self in a poem: I am God, I am a Vampire. Actually I am so relaxed to rate your poem. In I am a Vampire, I said it so to make you smile. That you will drink my blood if I rated it low. I like your style, but was too short and that keeps me wanting to read for me. Keep it up! Cheers!

    christianprep

    07/08/2009

    lol why thanks i know well now understand

    christianprep

    01/22/2010

    its a heiku its not suppose to be long...but thanks i realy appreaciate ur comment

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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