Death of a Hero

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  • Death

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    First of three parts. Still working on the other two.

    Death of a Hero

    In a village near the wood,
    Two gallant brothers proudly stood.
    One of wit, shadows concealed,
    The other bold, brandishing steel.

    Together strong, they kept the peace,
    Stalking down many a beast.
    Warriors they came to be,
    As they protected selflessly.

    The Earl from the mountains black,
    Heard word of brothers unsurpassed,
    And sent an offer most appealing,
    In hopes to send the brothers reeling.

    A prophecy of legends written,
    Lavish riches, all unbidden.
    Yet, only one would win the prize,
    While by his hand the other dies.

    The wiser of the brothers two,
    Could see the truth behind the ruse.
    Without the other, each was weak,
    Their village left to the Earl's keep.

    Unconvinced, the brother bold,
    Of the words the other told.
    Thinking, this time, that he was wise,
    Accused his flesh and blood of lies.

    At the dawn of the morrow,
    The brothers met 'neath skies of sorrow,
    And as the rain fell all around,
    Their crimson blood did stain the ground.

    As the wiser brother stilled,
    The prophecy, though false, was filled.
    High above the Earl smiled,
    To know his plan had been worthwhile.

    That eve, sounded a warning bell,
    And in a blaze the village fell,
    As the bolder brother grieved,
    The Earl's plot he'd not conceived.

    When the ash and smoke did clear,
    His anger born of death and fear,
    The warrior would rise again.
    His fallen brother he'd avenge.

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    lonewolf commented on Death of a Hero

    04-27-2012

    this poem is so brilliant, and so well written. this is by far the best poem ive read in quite a long time. im eagerly waiting the continued saga. this is more than a poem... its a story, and should be turned into a book. please let me know when you post the continuations. i tip my hat to you!

    ScarletDeath7

    04/27/2012

    Thank you very much. I'm hoping to have it up by next weekend.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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