Save Me

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When I wrote this I had a tune in my head to go with it, but it sounds alright by itself to.

Save Me

Falling apart in your arms,
Lost, unrestraining
Your eyes can contain me
With all the souls trapped out of hell.

And it's worth retaining
This love that you gave me,
But all I can do
Is find my way back to
This place where you saved me.

Someday is prone to forget,
Memories entertaining
This life for less pain and
Forever's a sentence to pass.

I present my undying request,
To clean, unredress,
Unconceive this confusion,
Redefine what lies in this mess.

Without you I'm lost,
With you it's confusing.
Alone I confess,
You just aren't worth losing.

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Qualin commented on Save Me

07-21-2012

Sounds like your heart is "CLOSED FOR REPAIR"!!!.................................

BrokenHeart2009 commented on Save Me

01-04-2011

I think you will make an awesome song writer because you words flow and have melody.

ScarletDeath7

01/05/2011

Thank you very much. It's inspiring to here you say that.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

ScarletDeath7’s Poems (11)

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The Fallen One 0
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From a Look 1
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Save Me 2
Letting Go 1
Simpler Times 1
Who Dreams 1