Dragging Torments

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    Dragging Torments
    Heart’s not whole any longer
    A dark abyss tearing it apart
    Cant find a cure…not willing to cure it
    Knowing he’s the medicine for my heart

    Everyday is a torment
    Trying my best not to think anymore
    It all ended so abruptly
    Feelings left without closure….

    The day is long
    The night is black
    My knees are weak to make it back
    Heart and mind broken to ash

    Could I last long?
    Can I continue?
    Answers I cant seem to decipher
    Cant seem to find them anyhow….

    Truth not reflected in my smile
    Feeling the growing torments of this brokenness
    I’m slowly dying…..
    Slowly dying….
    I am still waiting and hoping though
    I always do
    …..

    phoenix 11.11.08

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    DavidRayy commented on Dragging Torments

    08-07-2009

    WELL ACORDING TO THE DATES ITS THE NEXT YEAR AND YOU ARE STILL IN THE SAME EMOTIONAL STATE. I FIND THIS VERY SAD. YOU ARE SUCH A REMARKABLY BEAUTIFUL VISION, I'M SURE YOU HAVE MANY SEEKING YOUR HEART.............THE 1 ? YOU MUST ASK YOURSELF IS, WHEN WILL YOU OPEN THE GATE??? THERE'S A LARK WAITING WITH THE KEY......Y.L.L.I.W.
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