Forever Alone

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Forever Alone

Everyone says life is an adventure,
Don't take it for granted.
I feel like I have to live my life followed by a censure,
Instead of a straight-clear course mine is slanted.

Emotions are a weakness,
That's why, with them, I'm done.
Hiding behind a mask might be a sign of meekness,
But it's better than the feeling of being shunned.

If i do my best to blend in,
Maybe I'll completly disapear.
In real life a good guy can never win,
Our ultimate enemy is our fear.

Dreaming of a better life,
Always to far to reach.
I surrendered to the knife,
What destruction will it teach?

Crimson tears i could never cry,
Trail numbly down my arm.
If you're real quite you can hear the sigh,
Many make when they succumb to self-harm.

Tears pool at my feet,
Screams heard as i fade.
I wonder who I'll meet,
In the misty hills of Jade.

Disappearing is not permanent,
but dying can't be undone.
I'll never see again that glint,
Of the majestic setting sun.

My voice is but a whisper,
Floating through somber halls.
Will it find a list'ner,
before my final fall.
Can anyone save me from being alone,
I'll never really know for i'm forever alone.

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stellar commented on Forever Alone

11-13-2009

Oh this is so sad a writing though this is good the metaphors and the imagery is really good...The line that struck me most is "Our ultimate enemy is our fear" this is really true...I my self experience this in many ways...

BrokenAndrew

11/19/2009

it really is true...what are some of the ways you experience it?

stellar

12/17/2009

well I experience it when because of that fear i refrain of doing the thing I really want..and after it I blame my self for accomplishing nothing...We have to risk to gain something.,,Well cliche it maybe this line is kinda true..No guts, no glory

katielynn101 commented on Forever Alone

10-26-2009

i absolutely love this poem. oh my gosh the imagery is simply amazing... wow... you should post this on facebook and let people there read it. i seriously love it. :) Kaitlyn

BrokenAndrew

10/26/2009

I think i will! I love that you love it!!!

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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