King of Dreams

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Ok so this was inspired by my well guess you would call it a crush.  All i will tell you is King has something to do with his name.  Wanna know more just message me, and I'll try to reply

King of Dreams

Shadows are dancing around me,
The darkness is finally here.
Is my world finally ending,
Through it all, deep sobs, I hear.

My tears, like the rain, fall heavy,
Upon the window-pane to your heart.
Can you hear the siren calling,
Beware of his heart-broken song.

Crimson regret caresses my arm,
Will no one try to comfort me?
My screams are nothing but whispers,
Does anyone care to listen?

His arms gently wrapped around me,
His lips softly brushed my cheek.
He wiped away all my tears,
And promised to always be there.

He kissed me with a passionate strength,
My heart fluttered.
I whispered my King I love you,
But before he could reply I awoke.

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knight4696 commented on King of Dreams

01-30-2010

Nice work Andrew .. You manage to capture the longing and convey it well. The flow and imagery in this one is superb, Very nice job!

BrokenAndrew

02/16/2010

Thank you very much!

tykehall commented on King of Dreams

01-04-2010

excellent poem i've always loved a good grouping of words and the affect they can have this is a good grouping of words

BrokenAndrew

01/04/2010

Thanks! I'm so...for lack of better word...surprised you commented on my work. I actually really admire your work and it's kinda been a dream for you to rea mine, and BAM you did....I rambling sorry, but that's for commenting and liking!

stellar commented on King of Dreams

11-13-2009

This is a lovely poem...I love the imagery and the metaphors...thanks for sharing

BrokenAndrew

11/19/2009

thank you for liking it

katielynn101 commented on King of Dreams

10-26-2009

i really like these poems with four lines to a stanza. you're really good at writing them. I can't wait for you to post more. :) Kaitlyn

BrokenAndrew

10/26/2009

thank you! I'm glad to hear from you...I'll try to post more

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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