GAPING WOUND

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GAPING WOUND

 MY TREASURED OBSESSION
ENDURING WELL AFTER THE ENDEARMENT PERIOD
HAS BEEN SWALLOWED UP
BY
THE GAPING
WOUND
OF
FAMILIARITY

CONSTRAINTS ARE OUR OWN MAKING
A CAUTIOUS REMINDER OF.
A DISTANT LONGING FOR 
THAT SNUG SNUG ISOLATION

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ccslim commented on GAPING WOUND

06-08-2009

wOOt! The mundane insanity of repetition absorbed by our own desires towards personal satisfaction. Good content!
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davidcircle

06/08/2009

exactly that great cheers

Writer1 commented on GAPING WOUND

05-25-2009

I totally GOT this poem right off! Thanks for putting the words to a timeless and ageless feeling. :)
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Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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