mixed- metaphor aftermath

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mixed- metaphor aftermath

We  were ,
of course ,
drenched .
 
Such seemingly self-contained
metaphors ,

an icey reception .

Boiled over .

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Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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