liberties

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  • Love

    liberties

     bare lines 
    undressed
    liberties taken
    I love you
    time bares 
    unnurtured 
    liberties taken
    i hate you
    bare reality
    untethered 
    liberties forgiven
    I miss you

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    ccslim commented on liberties

    05-31-2009

    I like the way this is wrote to point out the steps of want, fulfillment, and despair. Only flaw I see is the little I...
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    davidcircle

    06/06/2009

    yesit is a strange topic maybe it needs work

    IzzyGumbo commented on liberties

    05-30-2009

    wow! what you can do with few words is amazing! And a fan I am as well now....................!! :)
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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