Guess My Name

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I wrote this poem in about 10 minutes. I was told by a preacher that I was filled with the spirit when I wrote this poem.
Personally, writing this poem was the turning point in my life, from not enjoying life to enjoying it immensely by letting God in to it.

Guess My Name

                                           Guess My Name
                                           By: Sandra Rains
                                                  2009
                                                                       
Though I walk through the valley
of uncertainty
I will not fear the unseen
And though I walk through pain
and misery
I will not become unclean
I have roamed this world for decades
untouched by human hands
I am but a fading memory
full of pain, you can not comprehend
In dark my face looks tattard  
worn and abused
In light I am like you
mistreated and used
I am the man that comes by
in the middle of the day
To hand you a book of wisdom
"I'm not interested", you say
So, I turn and walk away
Unshaken by your denial
Knowing you'll come begging
after a little while
For this world will soon be over
I'm gathering my sheep
I will not abandon
those I plan to keep
Can you guess my name?
Can you say it aloud?
In this, there is no shame
You must confess,  you can not be proud
I am the pretty butterfly
that gently lands 
My wings are that of velvet
My eye's that of man
I am the stray dog
that no one wants to feed
I am the open wound
that continues to bleed
Can you guess my name?
Will you talk of me?
Are you my friend?
Or my worst enemy?
This world will soon be over
it is coming to an end
Will you be saved and ready?
or committing sin?
Will you be waiting for me?
Or partying the night away?
Listen to me closely
and hear what I have to say
The end is so close, I know it
I set the date
Ask me for forgiveness
Do not hesitate
Asking, is all it takes
two words from you to me
Do this one thing
and 'chosen' you will be
But if you choose to wait
and put it off for another day
It's possible it'll be too late
Because I'm on my way
Now I have forwarned you
And I didn't mix my words
you can not call these parables
you can't blame me for your hurt
Just stop and look around you
Can't you see the devils deeds?
I'm asking you to claim your ground
and plant my loving seeds?
If you do this for me
I will not forget you or your own
and I will reward you 
and place you by my throne
Can you guess my name?
It's easy if you read the signs
It's just three little letters
known to all mankind
Can you guess my name?
Must I tell you after all these years?
Didn't you know my name
When I wiped away your tears?
Didn't you say "Please God, help me?"
And didn't I come fast and running?
and didn't I show compassion and help you mercifully?
It shouldn't be so hard
for you to say my name
When it has never changed
It's always been the same
I am the setting sun
that you so admire
I am the warmth you so love
by the wooded fire
I am the miracle
that amazes you.... when you die
I am your Lord Savior and Christ
I am your God.... it is  "I"

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BigDaddyCash commented on Guess My Name

11-22-2009

Hmmm, ten minutes, yes I'd say you were guided by the divine presence of a mighty power. I couldn't write that many words of divine infinite intelligence even if my pen was struck by lightning. Putting all else aside, this is a masterpiece of poetic art and if I could rate it 20 instead of 10, I would. Thanks for sharing, LOL, BDC.

SandraRains

11/22/2009

That is so sweet Big Daddy..thank you!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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