The Suffering

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    The Suffering
    Little children in this world
    bend to your little knee's
    pray to God, pray real hard
    and see what he see's
     
    The suffering will soon be over
    for you, little child
    God will take you in his hands
    His temper is but mild
     
    He will take you far away
    away from this cruel world
    And you will be but an angel there
    You will suffer no more
     
    Pray little child, pray real hard
    ask God to shooth your feet
    ask him for an angel while you roam
    along this long dark street
     
    Pray little child, on your knee's
    And God will hear your thirst
    For he has mercy on children
    Jesus was a child at first

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    BigDaddyCash commented on The Suffering

    11-22-2009

    I try to write a new poem everyday (sometimes more) and I call my style MY Way. I love to write and reading satisfies my appetite. I get my material from what I read and from the people I meet. That's why I'm here to read your poetry. First I read your profile, which, by the way, was very remarkable, now I'm here to check out your magic words. Your message is clear, the imagery is flawless and the plot is represented with golden words of talent. You really are on target with this powerful choice of words. Your thoughts and feelings are felt in your amazing gift as a poet. Thanks for sharing and letting me sneak into the parlor where you stockpile your works of art. LOL, BDC
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    TellTales commented on The Suffering

    11-01-2009

    Ok i get it you must be a child to enter heaven. At first i was thinking this child is sick. But no. Very nice poem.
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    SandraRains

    11/01/2009

    No...you don't have to be a child to get in to heaven friend...this poem was for all the mistreated and forgotten children...that's all...

    Gorby commented on The Suffering

    10-26-2009

    Sacred words can only express some sacred people ... I Like Virgins ... Baby girls , Growing ups or Grown ups ... false go to hell ...
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    SandraRains

    10/26/2009

    Do what?

    graceladymn commented on The Suffering

    10-25-2009

    All children are special in God's sight, this world is another story. May all children receive the protection they need to grow up unbent and unmolested.
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    SandraRains

    10/26/2009

    This poem was not about molestation...these comments are confusing for me, maybe I haven't had enough coffee....

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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