I Once Happy

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I Once Happy

I once happy
Poured my smiles onto
Small pieces of
Paper that when viewed
Individually
Poignantly share
The joy that will
Never be expressed
Because of the rain
Or the so
Happy cloud
My upside-down smile
Has spawned

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stellar commented on I Once Happy

10-22-2009

This poem is simply lovely....................... .......^_^ v

optimistic commented on I Once Happy

05-05-2009

Happy then sad yes funny interesting point put in so many words good keep it up this is great

ivecute77 commented on I Once Happy

12-12-2008

COULD HAVE BEEN LONGER BUT LIKE YOU SAID IN ONE OF MINE IT IS YOUR PERCEPTION AND VIEW. AND I RESPECT THAT GOOD POEM.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

JEAGLEFEATHER’s Poems (25)

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The Death Of Reason 22
It's Down To This 18
Another Drunkard's Attempt At Thinking 11
Solitary 4
Black, White or Other 7
Are You In The Mirror? 5
Life As It Is 4
Pieces Of Diety 34
Dream Me Dark 6
Happiness Ellusive 2
Among Smoke And Ash 4
In Quiet Do I Awake 2
In Silence Do I Answer 6
Down By The Darkside 2
The Summer Of Cassandra 3
Native Land 9
Your Best Friend 3
Rimbaud In A Dream 1
Rivers Of Memory OR Lost In Time 3
I Once Happy 3
I Awoke Dead 6
Comin Of The Rain 6
Four AM And A Cup Of Coffee 6
Life Is Just Waiting To Die 13