In the Days of Old

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    Back in the early days , in the beginning of time there was aman and a woman named Adam and Eve.

    In the Days of Old

    Long before time there was one God that existed
    back in the genesis days of old He reigned
    the dark serpent of betrayal took his stand
    but to God's wrath he did not prevail,or measure up to God's hand

    Sin was his entrapment, his terror of imprisonment
    the dark fiery pits of hades was his residence
    for love he did not seek but hate, war and blood
    my God came to defeat with the powers of love

    A tree of great knowledge stood amid
    this garden where Adam and Eve lived 
    the dark serpent tested his tongue
    he shot lies at the woman like a loaded gun

    His determination to bring lust to her eyes
    this was the downfall of man in it's wicked disguise
    the serpent was hoping to rise to acclaim
    but his lies never gained him any type of fame

    The Devil, Satan, the Prince of Lies
    call Him what you want it's no surprise
    every story has some type of end
    this is about the fall to envious sin 

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    am2anangel commented on In the Days of Old

    02-11-2011

    An all true vision of what once was and our downfall. well done. -Tonya

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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