Killing What's Inside

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Killing What's Inside

A broken heart still beating,
Scarred wrists still bleeding.
Blood-shot eyes still crying,
the girl inside is dying.

She watches as her heart bursts;
she breaks the skin although it hurts.
She wipes her tears, knowing they will never dry.
The girl inside wishes she would die.

Finally, the beating stops;
Finally, the sharp blade drops.
Finally, the tears are done.
The girl on the outside has finally won.

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kittman101 commented on Killing What's Inside

08-03-2009

although the pain of the world is often times too hard to bear, please know there is someone there, someone who wishes to share the moment. even when death lfeels like your atonement. you are the heart that beats for one. you are the light from within the sun. you cannot see this because you are not shown. someone will miss you if you are gone. i am just a voice to say hello. now that i have found you please dont go. there is so much i want to know. if the blood flows then you will have to go, because it will be to late...and no one will know. death is life, just reborn anew. With out you as a friend i dont know what i would do, although i never met you i feel your pain. The life you lived is just insane. you are not invisible in the world. Some times we walk side by side, hand in hand. and i am to be unnoticed until you need me. your strength is my widsom. your laughter my happiness, your saddness my pain. your hugs my freedom. i am but a friend that has not been met, yet we have met in another lifetime. and i wanted to say hello to you.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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