Untitled 1

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    Untitled 1

    She closes her eyes
    and tries to sleep.
    But into her mind
    the memories creep.

    Sher remembers the laughter;
    she remembers the smile.
    She remembers the face
    she hasn't seen in a while.

    She tries to forget
    all the fun times they shared.
    And she tries to forget
    just how much she cares.

    She tells herself
    it's no big deal.
    But she can't help but wonder,
    Does she love him for real?

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    kittman101 commented on Untitled 1

    08-03-2009

    love can be a really scary thing. it hurts it stings, it makes us want to cry, it makes us want to sing....and the moment its gone...it almost feels like a dream, something that never really happened...but it did and your mind and body knew that it happened. like floating in a cloud of confusion. never knowing, never understanding...only knowing that you smiled...and that smile is now gone...you are truly very passionate. thank you for allowing me to read your poems, feel the emotions you put into them...and seeing a side of you very few will truly ever know.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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