'Til Love She Finds

2 Comments

Tags:
  • Love
    • ,
  • Sadness

    'Til Love She Finds

    Daylight comes and midnight goes.
    As for her, her sould forever flows.
    Golden heart-
    soul so pure.
    He is the only one with a cure.
    A tangled we of confused minds...
    Secrets kept 'til love she finds.
    Daylight goes and midnight comes.
    As for her, she must raise her soul from the slums.
    Her golden heart has turned to bronze.
    The ties she made are now broken bonds.
    Her feet are grounded as free birds fly
    With those secrets kept
    'Til love she finds.

    Poem Comments

    (2)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    kittman101 commented on 'Til Love She Finds

    08-03-2009

    have you ever stopped to wonder just how much you lay asunder. the wind that blows and carries silence whether there is calmness or defiance. we don't care yet we say that we do sometimes it helps for others just to see you. standing there with troubles so high, they know you will listen to them, whether your a girl or guy. they're afraid to approach, but know they must or the pain from inside will eat them like rust. do you walk around or do you stay, knowing just a hug or smile will make their troubles go away. you look away and hear the birds chirping away in their own little words. listen closer and what can you hear, the sound of angels singing in cheer. no one can tell what they say as the wind does blow, but if one listens close enough they too will know. stop and listen what do you hear? focus too hard and sounds will dissapear. now you can see beyond all that stuff the real world itself can be tough do you lend your ear to that friend in need god will teach you to grow and succeed. you listen and watch with greatness and intent you are one of gods children he gives us consent. how to live and how to grow, showing you can listen will tell how far you can go the world itself can help show you the way but by planting gods own trees you will help others to see another day.
    Reply to Comment

    soulmate commented on 'Til Love She Finds

    07-20-2009

    this poem shows me that christ is the real love that we all need in out lives....he will align us with his people slowly but surely!!!! wont tell you to reach for the stars because your in your own galaxy.....just breath and wait on the lord!!!!
    Reply to Comment

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    Brokeninside10’s Poems (18)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    I am a Guard Girl 1 08/10/2009
    Let's Make Some Magic 1 08/10/2009
    Untitled 3 0 08/10/2009
    Forget Him 2 08/08/2009
    A Secret Son 4 07/31/2009
    Untitled 2 1 07/20/2009
    Untitled 1 1 07/20/2009
    Two People: Part 2 1 07/20/2009
    Two People: Part 1 1 07/20/2009
    Breaking Away 1 07/01/2009
    Mysterious Stanger 1 07/01/2009
    Together Forever 1 07/01/2009
    Bedside prayer 1 07/01/2009
    Baby's First Night Home 2 07/01/2009
    Killing What's Inside 1 07/01/2009
    'Til Love She Finds 2 07/01/2009
    Nothing Left To Say 1 07/01/2009
    That Should Be Me 2 06/30/2009
    Top of Page