Two People: Part 2

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    Two People: Part 2

     He sees her as he walks through the halls.
    He comes to help her when she falls.
    He watches her while she's standing there,
    with her hair on her shoulders, she looks so fair.
    He loves her more than words can say
    and he hopes she will love him one day.
    There is one single thing that haunts his heart-
    the fact that he's wanted her from the start.

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    kittman101 commented on Two People: Part 2

    08-03-2009

    i love this poem. its mental imagery, its heart pounding, adrenaline rusghing moment...sigh to have a crush and not know how to say things to the person they care about...i remember those days. and when it happens you find out that person was more afraid then you were...and it works out.
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