Two People: Part 1

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    I wrote this my Freshman year in High school about a friend and her crush.

    Two People: Part 1

    She sees him in the morning light.
    To her, he's the only thing in sight.
    She feels a burning in her heart-
    She knows it has been there from the start.
    She loves him more than words can say
    and she hopes he'll love her back one day.
    When she sees him, her heart skips a beat
    and she prays one day, their hearts will meet.

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    kittman101 commented on Two People: Part 1

    08-03-2009

    i believe it is truly ssomething speical that you can see things the way you do. yet for me to look through your eyes its almost like feeling it was you. you have an amazing gift, you have an amazing spirit.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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