my tears

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my tears

even though life is hard and i break down
i cant help but think that my tears somehow calm me
they calm the storm that flows with in my body
like when it rains and then the sun shines and it stops
though i feel like a speck like im nothing
i am something and somehow my tears show that
though tears should not be showed 
it breaks my heart to know that the gentalest things cry
that that thin layer between calm and wreck can shater so quickly
with the mition of a word or a place
we should have happy memories
but we cant always put on a brave face
we need to cry because if we didnt we wouldnt show people our feelings
noone can truly read minds so we have to know what each other is feeling
though we travel our paths alone we are never truly alone we must stick together and we must bond if our emotions is our bondings then so be it
but i know that my tears calm me and they always will they show me that i am olny who i am and for that i love my tears

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bluewolf commented on my tears

08-19-2009

A nice poem, however I must disagree with your theory of tears.

scrye commented on my tears

07-28-2009

Beautiful my dear friend and so nicely put into words. Keep writing because like your tears it is a part of who you are, and keep rejoicing in your life good or bad we need to experience life. Well done my friend and a 10 from me

amber12172 commented on my tears

07-28-2009

This poem is more amazing than the other one i just read. I love it so much more because i believe in this poem. Thanks for having me read your poems. =)

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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