rivers so high

3 Comments

Tags:
  • Fantasy

    rivers so high

    Fun, love, boy, girl, twist, whirl
    all the things that make you twirl,
    twisting, spinning, laughing giggling
    first kiss, first love all twisting
    spinning, the words you see the things
    you hear, this is life don't fret my dear,
    patience comes to those what, let music play,
    let children sing,
    white roses circling a crimson moon,
    cresant in shape but in full bloom
    silver stars that float then fall
    crashing, shattering, those sparkling shards that fall
    around the pretty girl in a blue gown,
    rain that falls in rivers so high
    they float of the earth and into the sky

    Poem Comments

    (3)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    KING commented on rivers so high

    05-22-2010

    It seems you bring us celestial essence. You did that with a few lines a few words. Impressive. :D

    winterkou commented on rivers so high

    02-26-2010

    a very descriptive write , not bad ill check out some more.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    amithissecret’s Poems (31)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    broken dreams 2
    Porcelain Doll 1
    kept inside 1
    hide 1
    lost one 2
    you tell me..... 0
    scarlet 1
    if at all 3
    honeysuckle 4
    the girl i use to be 6
    The Life of W.S. Merwin 1
    a name 1
    last love 9
    those that fall 1
    loast in a dream 4
    rivers so high 3
    the elite 1
    the real me 4
    velvet life 1
    RAIN 2
    autumn 2
    stars 6
    forever love 2
    i wont let you go 10
    leader of the stairwell 5
    I'm not your princess any more 5
    Never 2
    my tears 3
    rose petal wish 7
    music 8
    remembrance 8