~~~No Title~~~

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    Please tell me what you think, this is a personal piece for me...

    ~~~No Title~~~

     Skin and bones, withering away
    She struggles to survive day to day
    Between the hunger and ridicule,
    She fights to live on through

    Father degrades her,
    Mother just watches,
    Son sees it all
    And nothing can stop it.

    Her sleep, it ceases,
    While her appetite decreases
    It gets harder and harder
    Her waist gets smaller and smaller 

    She has nowhere to turn,
    Not a place in the world.
    Can you do something, please
    To save this young girl? 

    She wants to be loved,
    And wants to be embraced
    But all she gets
    Is a spit in the face.

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    MootPoint commented on ~~~No Title~~~

    11-16-2012

    I like this one. It is always good to write about personal things. I hope everything is looking up through the shadows.
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    ShadowEyes

    11/16/2012

    Thank you

    GenUWinePoet commented on ~~~No Title~~~

    06-07-2011

    great job./.. such a lonely life when no one cares. you are growing in your writing. now you just need a title.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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