Victory

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    this is a very very VERY old piece I wrote like... back in '04 lol.

    Victory

    Tears roll down my face,
    Mascara bleeding.
    I pace this empty room
    Wanting to be elsewhere.

    I gaze into the mirror
    The ugly facade of myself,
    Torture and pain are all I see
    In these bloodshot eyes

    I look away,
    Then back, punching it
    Breaking it into
    A million little shards

    You think I'm
    Going to run away
    Like I've done all my life
    You are DEAD wrong!

    I have taken all I can
    I'm standing here,
    ready for a fight
    Victory will soon be mine
    You may have won this fight,
    But the war is only begun.

    You have messed with the bull,
    Now you're getting the horns
    I'm coming at you
    FULL FORCE!
    I'm not stopping,
    No, not for ANYTHING!
    I will have victory!
    I WILL HAVE THE LAST LAUGH!

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