The Way I Feel About You

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    I wrote this last night. It's not really the best I can do, but for now it'll have to be. Writer's block is a beotch. lol

    The Way I Feel About You

    As I sit here and ponder
    The words I can say to you…
    I honestly can’t think of any
    That can express what I feel for you. 

    I love you more than anything
    That I have ever loved before
    You make me happier
    Than anyone ever has before 

    You make me smile
    More than anyone before
    And make me laugh
    And that makes me love you more

    I see the way you look at me
    With that smile in your eyes
    There’s one thing I know for sure
    I could never tell you good bye 

    Every moment we are apart
    I miss you so
    And I love you, baby…
    More than you’ll ever know…

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    MootPoint commented on The Way I Feel About You

    04-21-2011

    Nice write. Sounds like a lucky guy. ~!~!~!~!~!~!~!!~!~!~!!
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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