Shut UP!

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  • Fallen4Ever
  • is you'll never really see, you'll never really know, not when it comes to me...You'll never even realize these poems are just pieces of my heart when it fell apart

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This poem goes well with the Ignore me and the disappointment, and they were all written around the same time in my life

Shut UP!

Shut up!
That's what I hear.
When I tried to speak my mind.
I'm cut off.
The more you tell me to shut up.
The less I speak.
The less I try to talk to you.
The more You lose contact with me.
The more you don't know anything about me.
You don't want to hear my opinon.
Cause you know i'm right.
That's why you tell me to shut up!
You talk, and you talk.
I hear every word. You don't.
You say shut up just to end my debate.
To end hearing my thoughts.
To end knowing what I feel.
The begining of losing touch with me.
The Begining of never understanding.
So it's time for you to...
Start listening.
Before I don't want to talk to you.
Start listening
Before I don't care anymore.
SHUT UP!
And listen for once in you're meaningless life.
SHUT UP!
I'm tired of you not listening.
SHUT UP!
I've tried to make you understand
To make you get me.
SHUT UP!
Everything I say goes into one ear
 And out the other.
SHUT UP!
Stop screaming at me.
SHUT UP!
You are the last person who should be talking to me.
SHUT UP!
You don't know me at all.
SHUT UP!
You don't get it.
You are the last person. I would ever go to for advice.
SHUT UP!
I don't want to hear you're voice anymore.
SHUT UP!
Just stop talking because I've stopped listening...

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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

Fallen4Ever’s Poems (30)

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The claim of blue 1
How fast can I run? 0
Snake 0
Colorful girls, Black Rainbow 0
But only in my dreams 0
The louder Silence 1
That Girl dressed in Black 2
Dude, look at me! (A teen rant) 0
I Wish 0
Grateful 0
Your life 0
Oh lady Hollow 1
Caring (It hurts) 0
COULD YOU LOVE ME? 1
Am I lonely 0
Laugh 0
Lesson Taught well (Thank you) 0
Folded 0
Goodbye 0
I'm Sorry 0
Past reflection 0
She 0
The Four life lessons 0
Truth 1
Shut UP! 0
A disappointmen
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Ignore me 0
Real Me 1
Resentment 0
Resentment 0