Dude, look at me! (A teen rant)

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  • Fallen4Ever
  • is you'll never really see, you'll never really know, not when it comes to me...You'll never even realize these poems are just pieces of my heart when it fell apart

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A rant to everyone who every questioned why I should dress the way I did

Dude, look at me! (A teen rant)

Dude, look at me!

And yes I just said dude.

Stop trying

Just stop viewing me

In what I should be

In how you think...

I should be

Cause obviously I just don’t care

Yeah I wear chains

I like black

My music screams

Deal with that

Call me whatever you want

I heard it all

But don’t get me wrong

There is a limit

To the names you may refer to me as

I’m not gothic

No I’m not Emo, whatever the fuck that means

No I’m not upset

Listening carefully

Sunshine and Daises are not my thing

And I will never know the latest trends

Cause once again I just don’t care

Don’t think that I ought to

Hate the world?

Because of what I look like; that’s what you think I do

The answer is no.

But I’m not feeling you at the moment

How can you tell me what I should look like?

It’s not that I don’t dress right

It’s that I don’t dress like others

I would never ask someone to change

Because I know I wouldn’t do the same

You may not believe

May not understand

But I’m happy with who I am

Not all of us are made of sugar and spice

Or puppy dog tails

Or whatever the hell they’re saying nowadays

No, you don’t understand

Please I don’t want your advice

Stop thinking I should look a certain way

Listen for a moment…

Just to do me a favor

Look in the mirror

And see that I’m not you.

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

Fallen4Ever’s Poems (30)

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The claim of blue 1
How fast can I run? 0
Snake 0
Colorful girls, Black Rainbow 0
But only in my dreams 0
The louder Silence 1
That Girl dressed in Black 2
Dude, look at me! (A teen rant) 0
I Wish 0
Grateful 0
Your life 0
Oh lady Hollow 1
Caring (It hurts) 0
COULD YOU LOVE ME? 1
Am I lonely 0
Laugh 0
Lesson Taught well (Thank you) 0
Folded 0
Goodbye 0
I'm Sorry 0
Past reflection 0
She 0
The Four life lessons 0
Truth 1
Shut UP! 0
A disappointmen
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Ignore me 0
Real Me 1
Resentment 0
Resentment 0