• Fallen4Ever
  • is you'll never really see, you'll never really know, not when it comes to me...You'll never even realize these poems are just pieces of my heart when it fell apart

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I was 15, when I wrote this. I wasn't emotional, I just wrote it

She

She feels emptiness inside.
Other times she feels sadness and loneliness.
She holds her head up high.
Like she is never wrong.
She is looking for light which she wants to belong.
Things all always in her way.
But she would rather fight then just to walk away.
She never wanted it to be like this.
She feels so much pain.
Yet no one knows.
No one ever knows she cares.
She knows she is to far gone for anyone to save.
Not that she wants to be.
She will keep on walking.
She will keep on showing the world that she is stronger then the rest. Nothing can stop her.
Even when darkness is all she now sees.
There is no one else going the way she is headed.
She is all alone.
 She loves it that way.

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The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

Fallen4Ever’s Poems (30)

Title Comments
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The claim of blue 1
How fast can I run? 0
Snake 0
Colorful girls, Black Rainbow 0
But only in my dreams 0
The louder Silence 1
That Girl dressed in Black 2
Dude, look at me! (A teen rant) 0
I Wish 0
Grateful 0
Your life 0
Oh lady Hollow 1
Caring (It hurts) 0
COULD YOU LOVE ME? 1
Am I lonely 0
Laugh 0
Lesson Taught well (Thank you) 0
Folded 0
Goodbye 0
I'm Sorry 0
Past reflection 0
She 0
The Four life lessons 0
Truth 1
Shut UP! 0
A disappointmen
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Ignore me 0
Real Me 1
Resentment 0
Resentment 0