The Right Stone

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The Right Stone

Oh for all the treasures found

I searched for a precious stone

Not rare diamonds often sought

Or fanciful gems well known


With unkept hair and dirty nails

And filth upon each knee

I crawled the earth to find the rock

A mission laid out for me


in-printed in hand, after many a day

There rested the wrongful find

Mis shapened piece held in hope

When I had become blind


I took the stone I found so dear

And walked up to the bank

Cast it swiftly upon the lake

And watched it as it sank


The glassy water eerily still

never a ripple was cast

As the stone found a place
In the bottomless depths at last


Never a whistling sound did it make

While traveling through the air

Never the sparkling dance I'd hoped

When it hit the waters there


Oh mistakened, saddened me

I'd chosen a wrongful keep

There was no joy to be found

In the game this stone did reap


With disappointment my head dropped

Hands fell to my side

Silence echoed through my ears

And something in me died


But for the joy a girl may feel

Of watching the right rock skip

I grabbed my things and set back off

A new stone to find this trip


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LonleyBiker commented on The Right Stone

06-18-2009

Who was the stone you cast into the lake and why ?

MysticFire

06/19/2009

it could be a who,and has been, it could be an idea and has been, it could be a plan thought to be a GOOD one that in reality stunk, and has been one(lol)the stone could be many things in life that didnt go as we thought it might.....its basically a poem about things sought that turn out to be different than what we want and bring disappointment but continuing forward hoping that the next thing, person whatever it may be) will be more suitable in our lives

BDIsernhagen commented on The Right Stone

06-15-2009

wonderfuly said and very profound. I'll have to come back later and digest it completely! thanks for posting!

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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