To The Lost Times Between Us

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    To The Lost Times Between Us

    And now I see you
    and no longer do I feel your warmth surround me
    or that feeling I never thought
    existed in anyone.
    And you ask me if I still love you
    and I'm not sure how to say
    that I dont think I ever did.
    And I think about what might have been
    between us
    if we both wanted it.

    I leave you
    and I turn back to see if you still stare back
    at me like lost times
    when what might have been
    between us, walked out -
    like me.

    And now I see you,
    and you offer me hours of apologies
    that I dont even feel I deserve.
    And I ask you why you took so long
    to tell me what it was that you felt,
    because I felt the same way
    at one point.

    I leave you
    and you ask others if they have seen me.
    You find me and ask me to come back
    to you, and I do.
    And I see you with the same face
    I once had, when I thought it was Love
    that I felt for you.

    And I think about what might have been
    between us
    if we both wanted it.

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    BestMonkey commented on To The Lost Times Between Us

    06-04-2009

    I liked this poem, I would say it could be a little more concise though. The rhythm throughout it was good though.

    mykhail commented on To The Lost Times Between Us

    03-06-2009

    Listen, this is truly beautiful, how old are you again? J/J! This is a fantastic poem, you express love very well and seem to have an excellent grasp on reality, we have all been here, again, beautiful! Your poetry is inspirational!

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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