What Did I Do

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    What Did I Do

    I remember you asked me once

    “ What did I do ”

    When you were wondering how
    How was it that I fell for you
    If you really want to know
    Explaining this could take a while
    Because those reasons are many
      All the beautiful words in existence just wouldn’t do
    But I promise that one day I’ll have
    A pile of reasons, all the how’s & why’s I fell for you
    So for now, I can only list a few
    Like one for example, your beautiful eyes
    & how I love the way
    They look when I see your beautiful smile,
    Another, I love your beautiful hair
    Long or short, either way I’m left breathless
    You amaze me, you make looking beautiful
    So easy, natural & quite effortless
    One last thing...
    How about your cute little giggle
    That usually followed something crazy that I said
    God I can go on forever, but I thought you’d like to know
    These things weren’t big, in fact little
      so you see, falling for you
    Was actually quite simple

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    shell101 commented on What Did I Do

    09-26-2009

    Hello, very nice, I thought it was ripe and straight to the point. I felt your warmth and your heart. Look forward to reading more of your work.

    MrChristian commented on What Did I Do

    08-25-2009

    Wonderfuly put! I'm really feelin this joint. You inspire me to continue writin!!!! Thanks for the inspiration!

    arfin09 commented on What Did I Do

    03-01-2009

    nice! thanks.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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