AND YET

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You are never to far gone till you are gone!

AND YET

 

Dirt, Grim pressed in

Matted hair, spots bear where it was torn

Wounded, bruised, scraped, beaten, sleep deprived and staved

No spark of life in these eyes laid down and gray

The smell of me causes me ill

My soul distressed caught and trapped in bone

I’d beg but have no breath

I would ask but their ears are deaf

I would walk but where

They look, yet not see

I am a rock, I sit and weather, cold and bear

And YET

You stop, you see

You kneel then sit before me

I wait for your sharp words to cut

But you said hello

I cringe inside myself rapping the fear around me

And YET

You take my hand in yours, gentle and warm

Your hand passes thru the grim and gnarly hair to raise my chin

I do not look in fear of you and all my sin

And YET

Your eyes find my eyes

Your soul reaches my soul

Here I sit in all my filth

AND YET…

                                                                                                                                             

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icu2 commented on AND YET

02-07-2010

And that is exactly what our loving Savior did. Beautiful job on this RJK. Keep up the good work. This one put a lump in my throat.

am2anangel commented on AND YET

01-15-2010

that was truly quite a beautiful piece. one correction; wrapping not rapping. You show that there are kind people on this earth that see past the unwelcoming images. Well done.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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