Dont you hate it....

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  • VampireGirl666
  • you broke my heart.. now i break your fucking face...

Dont you hate it....

Dont you hate it...
When he talks like he dont care?
Dont you hate it...
When it feels like the love was never there?
Dont you hate it...
when hes unphased by your pain?
Dont you hate it...
When you you want to cry in the rain?

Just to hide the tears.
that roll downyour face.
All those precious years,
just went to waste.
Hoping its not true
and your gut is lying to you....
Dont you just hate it...
when its true?

Dont you hate it...
When you once believed his lies?
Dont you hate it...
When times just flies?
Dont you think he'll regret it...
all the lying he has done?
Dont you hate it...
When he says hes gone?

yea...i hate it too...
we all do...
But dont you just hate it?

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Worthless commented on Dont you hate it....

03-08-2011

HATE IT, HATE IT, HATE IT, HATE IT, HATE IT, Hate it, HATE IT, HATE IT, HATE IT, HATE IT, HATE IT, HATE IT, HATE IT, HATE IT, HATE IT, HATE IT.. HEY, CAN i YELL NOW? HATE IT, HATE IT, HATE IT, HATE IT, HATE IT, HATE IT...... WAIT... HHHAAAAIIIITTTTTT IIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

VampireGirl666

03/08/2011

ya know. im half tempted to deleted this comment..

Worthless

03/08/2011

Delete it, I hate it! Fine, sorry i have lots of sarcasm and negativaty. you can bitch at me, i'll just bitch back.. Haha.. joking.. but seriously.. honesty is all we speak, right? I just thought you hated it is all? I wanted to let you know i hate it too, but i yell alot, alot of deaf and dumb people and a dad who's always drunk and hates me.. so yeah i yell.. sorry..

killingP13 commented on Dont you hate it....

02-11-2011

yes i hate it so much....ahhh sometimes it seems like guys cant do anything else but lie to you -_- great job made me anger

VampireGirl666

02/12/2011

aww D: im sry lol

angelchaser commented on Dont you hate it....

12-28-2010

I can relate.....well, if it were about a woman I could :P I've been through similar situations in life and they're not at all fun. Nicely written:)

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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