If i was a Rain Drop

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    • VampireGirl666
    • you broke my heart.. now i break your fucking face...

    If i was a Rain Drop

    If I was a Rain Drop.
    You'd be the sea.
    So when i fell into your arms.
    Your waves would cradle me.
    Holding me close.
    Like a new born child.
    Protecting me with waves.
    So gentle but Wild.
    Keeping harm far.
    Keeping me near.
    Holding me close.
    Oh so dear.

    So if i was a Rain Drop...
    Where would i be??
    Id fall from the heavens.
    and into your sea.
    So hold me forever.
    And never let go.
    Let this precious love.
    Forever and ever flow.

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    Worthless commented on If i was a Rain Drop

    03-08-2011

    Angel Chaser was right, this one is good and i really want to read more and I still might, but i am tired and i wanna try to get some sleep tonight..

    angelchaser

    03/08/2011

    She is a wonderful poet and I cherish this one. Breathtaking.

    sk8erpoet commented on If i was a Rain Drop

    03-03-2011

    this is a beautiful poem....this is so great its..its...its perfect!...its great how much love you show in it..great write..i love it..sk8

    VampireGirl666

    03/05/2011

    haha thank you Sk8. As usual your comment make me smile.

    killingP13 commented on If i was a Rain Drop

    02-11-2011

    i know you hate it when people yell ( yes i read your bio) but WOW that was perfect! makes me a little jealous actually -_- lol this is going in my favorites! big gigantic 10!

    VampireGirl666

    02/12/2011

    haha.. thanks lol

    TruePoetry commented on If i was a Rain Drop

    01-07-2011

    Quite the perspective, Love the metaphor, Definitely inspiring, and almost makes my heart envious of your talent

    VampireGirl666

    01/07/2011

    ^_^ thank you...

    cattop90 commented on If i was a Rain Drop

    12-30-2010

    this is the most emotional and greatest poem i ever read,i love it

    VampireGirl666

    12/30/2010

    thanks :)

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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