Fade Away

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    • Mayuna
    • Anata wa Naraku no hana ja nai ~ You are not a flower of Hell

    Fade Away
    How hard must I blow 
    How many tries would it take
    To extinguish the flame of my life

    I am sick of the accusations
    So tired of the lies
    Living each day face to face with my worst nightmares

    To let it all go
    Simply slip away
    How I wish I could burn out suddenly 

    Instead I must watch who I once was fade away 

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    kdarcy commented on Fade Away

    11-21-2010

    An excellent write, JadedJ said it all ... where did the wind in my sails go? lol Looking forward, the new person that emerges each day has something to give and say ... smile and know you made someones day, be well my friend ... not fade away k
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    Marsink commented on Fade Away

    10-01-2010

    That is a renewal of your core being! I have seen the erosin of my od nature rise and fall thousands of times--never stop approaching the goal of being the finest person possible! Applause building!!
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    JadedJezzabel commented on Fade Away

    09-26-2010

    there is something about people who live as a shell of who they once were that tells me they would not be able to write poetry such as you do.........sometimes when one fades away what emerges is so much more whole.....something tells me if you could let go of the bitterness and the blame and the hurt you would see that beautiful happy woman who is living there in your shadow. great poem a 10
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    Mayuna

    09/27/2010

    Thank you very much for your kind words. I appreciate it more than you could ever possibly know.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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