gone again

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    Poem Commentary

    I wrote this to the instrumental of viva la vida by coldplay.

    gone again

    A lonely night is where I started
    Thinkin’ please come back
    My baby left me
    And I don’t know if I can get her back

    Drunken nights comin’ home
    I put aside all you’ve done
    You left a note sayin’
    Please don’ try to find me Sean

    On my knees askin’
    God please bring my family home
    You even changed the phone number
    On your cellular phone

    What I do?
    Jag the best thing that I had
    Took your things
    And moved with your mom and you dad.

    Did I really push you over the edge?
    Was the words that I said
    So terrible you left my
    Soul on the ledge?

    So terrible that I left with no choice?
    You hear the pain in my voice?
    It sounds strange
    But I know I could change

    I tried to keep you with
    Diamonds and chains
    It was all just a fable
    You left the keys on the living room table

    You left me once before
    But you came back home
    But I think this time
    That your gonna stay gone

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    cmlestrade commented on gone again

    08-01-2009

    Good reading, emotional but very truthful. No excuses made in this, honest and hopeful in its content. I enjoyed it very much.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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