HEAR MY PRAYER

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HEAR MY PRAYER

 

A simple request that I have on this day.

That my prayer comes close enough that the Lord may hear.

As it finds itself on the path to the most perfect way,

While my soul receives the comfort of HIS presence near.

 

Nothing special that I need on this day.

Just the pleasure of knowing that my GOD still cares,

As I added a little faith with the words that I pray.

Giving HIM the recent updates, just to keep HIM aware.

 

Nothing special that I request on this day,

Just my soul, receiving the feeling that YOU are still there.

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duty commented on HEAR MY PRAYER

11-04-2010

You made a deposit in someone's else's account today. The fewer the words, the better the prayer. Your poem is the doorway which the human soul passes from selfishness to service and from solitude to kinship with ALL mankind.. This is a 10.....AMEN

orsonav

11/04/2010

Thank you very much for continue to read and comment on my work. May God bless you as you continue your services of Him, by serving man.

WordSlinger commented on HEAR MY PRAYER

07-17-2010

Orson, you are a wonderful spirit/man, he hears you, :), ty WS

duty commented on HEAR MY PRAYER

03-23-2010

Your poems are great,so awesome Reaching souls near and far, Each poem serves to remind us How richly bessed we are.

orsonav

03/23/2010

Thank you very much for your kind words Duty. May God richly bless you.

Mareann commented on HEAR MY PRAYER

11-08-2009

Very beautiful poem, shows much expression and passion for God. Simply lovely,, Mary

orsonav

11/08/2009

Thank you for reading my work. May God Bless you.

Karma885 commented on HEAR MY PRAYER

11-07-2009

wow in a way this poem is sooo peacful i like the poem and the story. i can picture what your sayin in the poem. so i have a image in my head. this poem get a 10!!!....BE SURE TO READ SOME OF MY POEMS N COMMENT

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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THE LACK OF LOVE IN LIFE 7
TO WRITE POEMS FROM THE PULPIT: THE ORSON VALLEY SERMON 10
HEAR MY PRAYER 9
THE UNOPENED BIBLE 11
THE SMILE ON THAT USHER 3
THOSE IN THE IMAGE OF ME 6
TO TURN FROM GOD 1
THE ABSOLUTE VALUE OF ME 2
JUSTIFICATION OF MAN 2
WITHOUT COMMUNION 2
TO SOW GOOD SEED 2
TESTIMONIES OF THE REDEEMED 2
HOW EXCELLENT IS THY NAME 4
BLESSED ARE THE PEOPLE 2
THE HEART OF HIM THAT HAS UNDERSTANDING 1
TEACH ME THY WAY 3
JUNE 25TH 2009 THE DAY MICHAEL JACKSON AND THE MOON WALK DIED 3
MY EYES HAVE SEEN 0
I CRIED UNTO GOD 2
THE COVENANT OF A FEW 1
THE APPLIED SCIENCE OF CHRISTIANITY 2
SONG OF A BROKEN CHOIR 2
BETWEEN MAN AND WIFE 3
OUT OF THE BIBLE BELT 2
ONE FAITHFUL DEACON 2
MODERN DAY MOUTHS OF BABES 4
IF GRANNY COULDN'T PRAY 8
FOLLOWING MOMMA TO CHURCH 5
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BUT WHAT ABOUT YOUR BROTHER? 4
ANXIOUS TO BE GOD 7
THE LANGUAGE OF GOD 5
FAITH WITHOUT WORKS 7
THE FALLING DOWN OF COMPASSION 4
AND JESUS CRACKED THE SKY 8
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MY BELOVED CHURCH HOME 2
FULLY SUBMERGED? 3
THE WORKING CHRISTIAN 2
MORE THAN SUNDAY DINNER 7
THE DOORS OF THE CHURCH ARE NOW OPEN 2
LIVE FROM THE PULPIT 4
THE DEDICATED PASTOR'S WIFE 5
ON MY PEW SAT HOPE 7
THE PREACHER'S CADILLAC 7
Letter To The Unchurched 8
A NEW DRUM 5
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