Hesitation

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    Hesitation

    I fear to say you own my heart,
    mind, soul and every part
    yet.... my love is impatiently strong
    and my instinct says with you, belongs
    my strengths, my hopes and my desires
    but for now I rest the flames of desire
    because im frightened of the word of trust
    a simple phrase, mirages formed by doubtful lust
    of picturesque visions of perfect union
    and problem free lives with pure communion
    taken with an understood fate
    of lies spoken never too late
    to wreck a life, or kill a dream
    to tremble with fear or kick, or scream
    avoiding the terror of one lonely kiss
    all because of images you could not miss
    overreacting a simple declaration
    your heart is the victim, no chance for re-creation

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    LeLover commented on Hesitation

    03-25-2009

    Right there with you on this one!

    PawPrint commented on Hesitation

    03-19-2009

    Love it!!!!!!

    kaleo55 commented on Hesitation

    03-16-2009

    the power to re-create is within all...trust your own heart. It is there others will be drawn to

    graceladymn commented on Hesitation

    03-15-2009

    Great and worthy Creators recreate. I go for trust.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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