The Creation of the Act of Suicide

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    The Creation of the Act of Suicide

    Negative lusts of diminishing strife
    Teasing ideas of taking your life
    Deciding that life is no longer the worry
    Rushing the emotions you're dying to bury
    With quickness you find yourself with a gun
    And think to yourself, "it's only begun"

    Demonically racing, your heart is crying
    But no one hears, so you'll scream by dying
    You can't find the bullets, you start to stammer
    The lifeless taste in your mouth gets blander and blander
    Your fears start to fade as you tremble with them
    The pressures of life, your soul the victim

    You look in the chamber and fate stares back
    Your destinal challenge, small, shiny and black
    The barrel is upon you, controlling your fate
    Your finger pulls the trigger, erasing the hate
    The life that's so precious, has just fallen dead
    And suicide has reigned, your crying heart bled

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    LeahCharde commented on The Creation of the Act of Suicide

    06-17-2009

    Damn...this is very deep! I must say that I understand the mindset in this piece and I have been there!!!

    USMCdale commented on The Creation of the Act of Suicide

    03-25-2009

    Very good poem, I'm not fond of the topic. Suicide is the ultimate selfish act and is never the answer...its a waste of humanity

    nakedtruth43 commented on The Creation of the Act of Suicide

    03-15-2009

    I can feel the pain in your writing...very intense.

    graceladymn commented on The Creation of the Act of Suicide

    03-15-2009

    Tough one this is. Pain can be like that at times though.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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