I could do more alone

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    Poem Commentary

    It is about inspiration to the people depressed of decaying world with lost values and increasing SIN and motivating them to change themselves as GOD wants them to be so that the GOD will be more happy to see their transformation. One small gift is enough to GOD, No?

    I could do more alone
    What can I do alone?
    A valid question?
    conscience agrees not!
    King alone surrender, can save
    many soldiers; 
    If the defeat inevitable
    What can I do alone?
    A valid thinking!
    I can become a king
    though I can not change 
    the world;
    But, at least I can change
    myself with surrender to GOD
    and can save a soul;
    GOD will be happy with this as
    one live soul is more important
    to HIM
    than the multiple dead souls;
    I am happy with what 
    I could do alone!



                                          - R K CHOWDARY
     

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    jeanpnkldyg commented on I could do more alone

    02-22-2011

    Surrendering is always an individual decision, but we are also told that prayers are best heard 2 x 2.
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    RKCHOWDARY11

    02/22/2011

    Thank you for liking the poem and your comment. I do agree prayers are best heard. But we don't offer GOD to hear our words of prayer and wish the people to listen all our waste and vice versa

    jeanpnkldyg

    02/22/2011

    Yes, the goal is manifestation.

    andy2103 commented on I could do more alone

    02-22-2011

    War is bad, Religious wars are worse. God can't be pleased at all the souls that are dying in his name. Good poem.
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    RKCHOWDARY11

    02/22/2011

    Hi andy Thank you for the read,like and comment of the poem. You are right. Warriors like Alexander, Napoleon, Hitler etc perished in the wars. One should learn from the history, but instead people are ignoring it. Now the whole world is perishing in the wars of many kinds. Let us pray GOD to save his planet and people.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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