The crux of true life

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The true love is to be fair and should not to fall by temptations. Love does not see the materials but the loving heart. A true lover who is ready to give his life and sacrifice must not be hurt, but instead to save such heart as a precious soul.

The crux of true life

Have my heart and don’t leave me

Hug my love but don’t forget me

Sell not yourself, to the costly love

If my heart is sultry, don’t pierce it

Moon gifted?

Then don’t push away my love

Into the deep hole

Let not the wishes be wild desires;

If the dreams are so small

Don’t disturb yourself

My voice in your heart sings the melody

Lie on my heart and have a deep sleep

And discard the dreams that is fake

Life will be ready with a net to trap

Your life, day and night

Though you are a small fish

Or a big whale;

Remain a good human to fail the net

And not to miss the life in a bet

I am living in meditation beyond the life

I hold the death until our love unites

And redeem our lives from tyranny;

Family is rotating around me

And my life is hiding in its orbit

People are troubled in my hide

This is not fair to revolve them 

My love is known to you more than me

I had drunk unpalatable remedy

And gave you the lovely nectar

Love is not crimson silk

It is the blood of the white pigeon

Don’t cut the pigeon by mistake

If the pigeon is hurt, my heart is cut

If you are left, my life will be lost.
                   - R K CHOWDARY 

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Coltsfan777 commented on The crux of true life

03-06-2011

another beautiful write!! you simply amaze me and keep me wanting to come back for more.

RKCHOWDARY11

03/07/2011

Hi Dear Coltsfan Thank you very much for your like of this poem. I feel it is needy to be restructured for more beauty and meaning. I will do it soon and keep you informed. RKC

sanctus commented on The crux of true life

02-24-2011

An astonishing piece of writing..............................

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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