The soul of nightingale

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The poem is around the nightingale sings the song in the nights for the people suffering in the nights with some kind of pain. Every man and woman wants to have a peaceful and joyful night after having worked for whole day, but in the traumatic life with many and more problems in the life, are unable to have delightful nights. Either pain of life or some kind of nightmares disturbs their nights. The beautiful and melodious bird Nightingale sings its song only in the nights addressing the people with suffering and to soothe them with its music. The theme is to suggest the people to let their own hearts to be looked and felt as Nightingale and listen its music – divine music bestowed by God and enjoy the night as much as possible setting aside all the problems at bay.

The soul of nightingale

The soul of nightingale   

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The life, sincerely subdued

To the exciting song of nightingale

Through the painful nights,

And in the distress of moments

Its sorrow, fixed in joy and bliss

In the meaning mesmerizing;

 

The song, concerted in the wilderness

Providing its life, to the trivial inertia

Filling its tone, to the taciturn minds

And yet, while dying with mortal life

Applying its immortal tenor, to the nights

Sharing its love to many, from plain heart;

 

Of tonight, missing the fine raga…

The aching soul, heavily burdened

Hiding itself, in the alcove of the life

With feelings, blocking the wild thoughts

And thoughts, thinking of the serenity

Refusing, to enjoy the cheerfulness  

Of memories, of syrupy song; insignificant;

 

The amateur poem, the lively picturesque

Freedom into perfection, chanting Vedic hymn  

To enliven the nightingale, to the ecstasy

Allowing it to dwell, in the incessant nights

With its music of right, restored to life

That the wild nights, cause to be the softness;

 

Even the cherubs depressed of tedious heaven

Crying, for resurrection of the song of power

To cherish their existence, in accurate divinity

While the miracles astonished, of the miracle

Of resurrection of melody, cleansing the malady;

 

The pain in the heart, adapting the rhythm

To its veins, singing the obituary to the love

Sweetening the night, in divine dream of life

Keeping the melody in experienced peace,

Breathing the consistent nights of nightingale 

To feel the nightingale, under the warm chest;

 

The life, successful at its sweet and sacred death

Still, bestowing its curing to the community

And yet, at the point of receding into silence 

Giving its fractional vigor, to the abundance,

In the form of nectar, spewed by the sky

That the night in gale, vanished to fly;

                    

                                    By: R K Chowdary 

 

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Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

RKCHOWDARY11’s Poems (26)

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The peaceful life 0
The soul of nightingale 0
THE GIFT OF GOOD FRIDAY 0
Snuffle of howling aroma 0
Freedom from evil! 1
The piece of heaven 1
The wedding of the nature 1
The crux of true life 2
The birds in unbreakable egg 0
In the night angels descend 0
With smell of water 2
stand by the life 0
I could do more alone 2
To the blind love – with love 0
LOVE A PSEUDO CONSCIENCE 1
The beauty discovered 2
THE STREAM IN THE DESERT 2
THE ECHO OF SILENCE 1
THE LOVE RESTED IN PEACE 1
THE DREAMS OF NIGHTMARE 1
EQUILIBRIUM OF LOVE 2
AGAINST THE WALL OF SKY 0
WHO IS BORN AGAIN? 1
LOVE TASTIER THAN A KISS 0
THE POINT OF SALVATION 0
THE SACRED LOVE 2