I would ask myself

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    I would ask myself

    I stumbled across a mirror
    as i walked along the sand.
    It was a struggle to retrieve it,
    it was just outside my hand.
    I wiped it clean of it's dust,
    then could see and understand.
    The image on the other side,
    my desire, be his command,
    A peek at the future
    is what i want to see,
    to see what would become
    of the me I planned to be.
    To ask a couple question
    to get to the bottom of the truth
    to learn form the mistakes i made
    and correct my wasted youth.
    My wish had been granted,
    I could ask the wiser me.
    What is the true meaning to life?
    What controls the powers that be?
    Through this magic looking glass
    I could see me sitting there,
    years had past and not so kindly
    aged far worse for all the ware.
    I was all alone, lost without shelter
    long gone were those who care.
    Hey you I need your full attention
    there's much you need to share
    You know what I need to know
    you can put to rest my fears
    you can ease my pain, heal my heart
    and wipe away the tears.
    I knew you when you were younger
    now I see where you are today
    Its the time that passes in-between
    that are colored in shades of gray
    If you will listen to me closely,
    I can keep you from falling apart
    It will take alot of soul searching
    but it will take it to mend the heart
    you can save us from this anguish
    just stop it before it begins
    tell me where to find the answers
    that will save us in the end
    There was a time when you were clear
    on the path you were to take
    The dreams you had,
    the life you wanted,
    the choices you needed to make
    The reasons, are what i need to know
    to understand this life you've lived
    If I don't get the answer I seek,
    it's me that we cant forgive
    Those we love will suffer and take
    the loss we've forced them to endure
    the error in our choice
    that offer no relief nor cure.


    There was a time when a passion
    for life is what you had known
    your heart was full, the future so bright
    and your faith in love had grown
    you gave with kindness and all the
    joy in your light had freely shown
    Once it was taken, but never gotten over
    from then to now you've been alone
    So the answer is... and I hope you listen,
    You can never do it all by yourself
    The meaning to life is found in the giving
    not in closed books stored high of a shelf
    The powers that be, no need to keep looking
    they live in the moments and the truths we tell
    Share your life don't live in silence
    its the only way to escape this hell
     
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    SugarOnTheMoon commented on I would ask myself

    08-29-2009

    Yeah I like that name haha i just wrote a new poem!

    SugarOnTheMoon commented on I would ask myself

    08-29-2009

    I really like this! I get it, I understand :) I like the mood of your poems..!!

    SugarOnTheMoon

    08/29/2009

    and by "mood" I mean "manner"...

    donnyl3224

    08/29/2009

    lol thats so sweet like sugar on the moon,

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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