The Burdon Of The son

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    Dad you are a hard act to follow.

    The Burdon Of The son

     Lift me from the ashes of my domain
    Cleanse me with the warm summer's rain
    unlock my soul from the halls of it's pain
    then fill my heart with life
    til I can stand nomore.

    Help me rise from the depths which I fell
    rescue me from the bitter cold as well
    allow me a less tragic story to tell
    by filling my heart with life
    til I can stand nomore.

    Lead me to the beginning of the road
    Burden me with your heaviest load
    fit me and shape me into your mode
    and you will fill my heart with life
    til I can stand nomore

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    Sx9 commented on The Burdon Of The son

    12-08-2010

    YES YES I FEEL YOU,,DEEP VIBES THAT BURN RED HOT,,CHIPS THAT FALL AND YES I CATCH A LOT,,THIS IS JUST COOL VIBES FLOWING STRAIGHT FROM THE TONGUE GUIDED BY PASSION,,SUNSHINE IS WHAT IT IS,,
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