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    if

    if

    i were 20 years younger

    better looking

    had money

    i would move

    to where you live

    i would

    hang out

    at the places that you

    hang out

    just to

    watch you

    move

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    Teardrops commented on if

    02-02-2011

    Best Valentine i ever read there is a lot of love in this poem Marie

    shallenemcgrath commented on if

    01-31-2011

    You scare me about how good your poetry is... I better step up my game.

    train64

    01/31/2011

    Thank you S..i'm just an old cowboy...

    WriterGenevieve commented on if

    01-31-2011

    I love it!!!! Sweet - simple - truthful - age is such a tricky thing. It doesn't always matter...

    train64

    01/31/2011

    WG Thank you for the kind words. T64

    angelchaser commented on if

    01-31-2011

    This is almost freaky, I've felt exactly this way before. Nice write, short and sweet and to the point. Nicely done.

    train64

    01/31/2011

    thank you so much..T64

    Len commented on if

    01-31-2011

    I think I know a girl like the one you are talking about. I see on the train in the morning and in my dreams at night. Good job!

    train64

    01/31/2011

    Thanks so much..We all do..Sometimes the train stops and you get off together..T64

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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