Let Me Worship You
Let me worship youthe way I used to
when our home
was heaven
and our bed
was an altar
on which I sacrificed
myself every night.
Let Me Worship You
9 Comments
- reyjamiei
- Dark Night Publishing is accepting submissions for a poetry anthology...Submit for a chance to have your work published with other great poets... https://darknightpublishing.submittable.com/submit/11322
the way I used to
when our home
was heaven
and our bed
was an altar
on which I sacrificed
myself every night.
Like this!?Like: The like button is a quick way to tell your friends and the writer you like their poem. The like feature is separate from a poem rating and will not add or subtract to the current rating of the poem. To rate the poem, submit a comment in the form below.
Poem Comments
(9)
-
copergirl commented on Let Me Worship You
01-03-2010
- Very good. A statement of great proportions from a short few lines. Your talent is awesome.
-
RubberSoul commented on Let Me Worship You
12-08-2009
- You may. :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) Syke, this ain't about me... :( Wait, that's good.
-
danmartyjake1 commented on Let Me Worship You
12-08-2009
- It's mysterious and lovely and short. I like it when you write like this.....
-
Madelynn commented on Let Me Worship You
11-22-2009
- This is one of those quickie poems that just-hit the spot! I love the refrence to catholicism. I use alot of that in my work as well-as I feel it almost crosses an artistic line. You have flavored your piece very well with it! -love this!!10.
-
12/08/2009
-
Maleficent commented on Let Me Worship You
11-19-2009
- This is actually the first one of yours I read... it is a really sweet offering of love... ~☮
-
11/19/2009
Please login or register
You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
Login or Registerleave comments/feedback and rate this poem.