Life lessons

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Life lessons

she left without a trace of grief,
no tears to hide the sigh of relief.
She didn't call to say hello,
no fear of what might come in tow.

Now im happy in my life,
really wanted to make her my wife.
one time cheating this ones free,
the second time the hurts on me.

I gave you a chance to change your ways,
hopfully make it to brighter days.
I took up for you when no one would,
always beside you strong i stood.

You didn't want any part of me,
even though it was offered free.
my heart, my life, all was yours,
yet you still walked out the doors.

Never looking back to see,
yet i knew i had to set you free.
In your bed you now must lay,
wishing you had had the strength to stay.

I lie awake at times and start,
to unlfold this mystery of my heart.
Why did I love you with all of my might,
when all your love was out of sight.

I tried with all my heart to stay,
You just kept on walking away.
Now I hope you all the best,
I know you can do it, pass the test.

You only have one shot at life,
Make it good, stand the strife.
If you run when times get hard,
You'll never be held in high regard.

I hope all your dreams come true,
No gray skies, always blue,
I hope you do all to live,
this lesson i've learned......

How to forgive.


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HiddenAngel commented on Life lessons

12-28-2009

geeze i wish i could have met her i would have really taught her so life skills...and lessions on respect,love,kindred,careing to others,humbleness she lost some thing that will never return back and i hope she learns from it.at least now u are happy and blessed by God and at most yu are highly favored in his grace God bless

mistynites26 commented on Life lessons

12-16-2009

Wow Daniel!!! Very moving write....To err is human to forgive divine.....Wonderful lesson and wonderful poem

ravenrose commented on Life lessons

11-10-2009

OMG I LOVED it. LOL .. I no how you feel. Ive been threw hurt and loss. Ive known alot of pain for my age. I mean my sister killed her self a couple months ago. Things in my past havehurt me more than ever... I guess your supose to learn from ur hurt. I havent yet.

daniel081180

12/22/2009

sorry it took me so long to get back to you but i will be praying for you and i hope you are doing well by the time you get this. take care and thanks for your comment i really appreciate it...

knight4696 commented on Life lessons

11-10-2009

Very Nice! I went thru a similar situation - but man - I wasn't so easy to forgive. And now is see my daughter going thru the same thing. Fidelity is a hard road to travel and temptation is always easy to give into. It's almost as if the world has lost it's conscience. Sorry for the pain you endured. Great job with this poem! You struck a chord, for sure. Ken

rougepriest commented on Life lessons

10-20-2009

kinda like a poetic letter rant. I would`nt know how to rate a poem like this, sorry you had to go through it. I assume this is a real deal story............Peace

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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