chaos

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chaos

The memories swirl through my mind,
i feel nothing towards you ,none unkind.
i think of all i did for you,
gave all for love you bid adeiu.

We had some great times together,
laughing, crying, thought it was forever.
I thought you gave me all your heart,
but of my heart you wanted no part.

I think of all we could have had,
all i feel is sadness, no bad.
I don't hate you this you know,
My love wasn't fake it wasn't a show.

I tried to give you everything,
gave you my heart, gave you a ring.
To you this really, didn't matter,
just a place to stay, a heart to batter.

Although you used me all the time,
my love for you was definatly prime.
I never thought you would leave this way,
take my baby and give her away.

The thoughts are hard to bear,
i hope you are happy, no animosity i share,
im truly happy for you, your loves arrieved,
stay true to your heart, keep love alive.

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HiddenAngel commented on chaos

12-28-2009

we will keep love alive...this i promise u we will nt fail..

loveswar09 commented on chaos

12-16-2009

Aw!!!! It's really sweet! Even though I totally don't like HER!! Hmph! Anyway.....It's really good. =) Really pulls at your heartstrings. *favorites*

chalkout91 commented on chaos

08-11-2009

wow. i could never be so forgiving....i guess this shows what type of a perosn you are. dont worry i can tell your the good kind

Milkman commented on chaos

08-11-2009

it would be nice if we were all equipped with a love meter so you could check and see if you are wasting you time or not........so sad but you will overcome this because of your generosity of love and understanding

photochick commented on chaos

08-11-2009

wow deep full of so much its sad that you can give so much and get no love back but you do get wonderful memories that you can carry with you for ever even if nothing else last in the relationship memories do great poem you can feel your love and pain as always it was a pleasure reading your poem and i can t wait to read more :)

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